Email from Carolyn P. Yoder to Carolyn Meyer


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Email from Carolyn P. Yoder to Carolyn Meyer

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Title:
Email from Carolyn P. Yoder to Carolyn Meyer
Series Title:
Girl with a camera
Creator:
Yoder, Carolyn P.
Place of Publication:
Tampa, Florida
Publisher:
University of South Florida
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English
Physical Description:
1 online resource, 1p.

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Abstract:
Email alerting Meyer to forthcoming editorial review of Girl with a Camera early draft.

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Source Institution:
University of South Florida
Holding Location:
University of South Florida
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All applicable rights reserved by the source institution and holding location.
Resource Identifier:
H43-00012-057 ( USFLDC DOI )
h43.12-57 ( USFLDC Handle )

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Carolyn: As I said, I am shooting to get my comments to you next week. I am half way through the manuscript. Heads up: the beginning is strong and Margaret is dealing with issues like growing up, rules, boys, her mother, etc. Once she gets to college her issues get lost. I really wanted to see what she is dealing with after leaving home-more of how she feels about her father's death, college life, her beginning passion for photography, etc. Tensions and dramas seem to be needed here. Also, the other characters at school need to be much more defined. (In the beginning, her brother is lost, but her mother and father and sister seem fleshed out. Gil also doesn't feel developed enough for the reader to care about him. Margaret at times doesn't really seem to care about him -or think about him. How does Gil point to a change in Margaret.) I think certain scenes could be much tighter -concentrate on how the important scenes that point to her evolution. (At times, I thin you're trying to get everything in.) Hope this helps. C Carolyn P. Yoder Editor/Writer Senior Editor, Calkins Creek Books Senior Editor, History, HIGHLIGHTS 44 Sycamore Court Lawrenceville, NJ 08648 cpyoder@yahoo.com 609-912-0781(p) 609-575-6780(c)


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