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Copy edited draft, 23 Minutes

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Copy edited draft, 23 Minutes
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23 Minutes
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Vande Velde, Vivian
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University of South Florida
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Time travel
Teenage girls
Bank robberies
Juvenile fiction

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Copy edited draft of 23 Minutes.

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University of South Florida
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VANDE VELDE/PAGE This is has nothing to do with you None of your business. Get out of here now. bank robber

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE OooOoh , thatÂ’ll leave bruises.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE DonÂ’t draw attention to yourself HeÂ’s going to kill us all.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE What have you done? Stop this Stop it now.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE years this You donÂ’t know for a fact that heÂ’s going to kill you Better the chance of maybe being killed later than definitely being killed now. Is he stupid or suicidal?

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE will Say it Say it now.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE wasnÂ’t now This has nothing to do with you he

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Is Dead Dead Dead I donÂ’t have to put my life in danger I donÂ’t have to come back hereinside the bank . I can stop this from somewhere else.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE such his Bad choice of words

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Why do they always ask that?

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE how

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE anybody then

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE dawdle chat Good None of your business

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE None of your damn business Leave well enough alone.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Oh no oh no oh no. whup-whup-whup inside What have I done?

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE has Yeah If I keep this up, maybe I can start a nuclear holocaust.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Being there calling the police her not seeing it happen

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE he Finely honed sense of who bears watching

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Well . . . clearly you already ARE speaking to me. And I am not yet beating you away with a stick, though I reserve that option . . . This is not going to work.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Who would ever bother HER? Of course you have scary acquaintances, and I donÂ’t want to get involved in that.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Really really really Now what? No false reports. No loitering.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE What now? That

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE I [heart] Rochester, NY good Never mind.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE he Crap crap crap

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE bad I canÂ’t choose whoÂ’s to die

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE What kind of stupid-ass question is that? If the villagers are so damn happy, why canÂ’t they find a way to accommodate one frigging kid? her inside

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE is This time IÂ’ll know whatÂ’s coming. I can be standing farther from the teller counte r. I can try to keep everybody safe. I can draw the guardÂ’s attention to the robber right away. I will not be an idle bystander. One more try This will be it, no matter what.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE all Pushover Silly question Of course theyÂ’d be bad. that

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE OooOoh that might actually be a good thing.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Probably not asking for a loan

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE such him

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Truly? truly truly Sincerely Yours truly Ah! I shouldnÂ’t have included Blitzen. before

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE yes no Why?

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE I was supposed to have been watching HIM Hand over the money or die

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE knows Please let him keep breathing

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE that Heart attack?

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE ever not

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE ItÂ’s not fair, itÂ’s not fair See that? Oh yeah . DonÂ’t let her get excited . . .Â…

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE her Back on familiar ground maybe

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE are Never mind. I need to let go I need to let go. any Truly. I wish . . . IÂ’m sorry sorry Not me I can take care of myself.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE And she was right the rest of her life

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE knew

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE No, no, don’t say you’re unmemorable—even though . . . oops! I guess I’ve just said you are.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE OK any

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE so what why

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE spectacularly something

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE I OK, IÂ’m not playing this game anymore. Yeah, at the beginning of when I was 13 thirteen and life was normal, one minute following another and no going back.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Hey, at least she wasnÂ’t two seconds faster, or she would have been run over. without Maybe racing isnÂ’t such a smart idea

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Then Never mind? No no no!

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE That That HeÂ’s never going to let me go HeÂ’s never going to let any of us go. So you might as well just shoot him now. Mr. President

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE looks like

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE risking her life to save him time out Deep breaths Think before you speak Identify possible solutions

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE How could you?

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE This is my life Hmph! Like thereÂ’s nothing in the world worse than a litterbug was

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE What kind of bank robber knows the names of SantaÂ’s reindeer? Yeah you wouldnÂ’t be so eager ly trying to fit a different meaning to what you KNOW was going on if he didnÂ’t have those gorgeous blue eyes. look That just goes to prove he has a disregard for authority the receptionist!

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE made excuses for Zoe she could have after

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Not deciding is deciding What kind of bank robber , knows the names of SantaÂ’s reindeer? should What kind of bank robber lets himself get distracted by helping an awkward girl feel at ease? He knew the bank robber thinks There wasnÂ’t that much time IÂ’ve seen you die armadillo

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE I almost let him die I assumed the worst, and I was prepared to let him die. ANYBODY can have a card printed

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Charlotte Well, yeah, if Charlotte is the one with the reddish hair and the curls and the glasses.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Poor Charlotte,

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE everything I told you so. emotionally

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE What have

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE this Crap! Why didnÂ’t I run away from this nut-casepsycho when I had the chance? No kidding, too quickly

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE arenÂ’t

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE might yes Good thought

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Keep yourself alive.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Daniel

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE And why do you think you feel that way?

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE You have a gun wW eÂ’ve lived through this before and Wallace was about to kill people knew YouÂ’ve got a gun and youÂ’re using an umbrella?

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE My fault My direct fault sheÂ’s dead.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE inside

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Good riddance.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE not has No loss there.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE I hate this. Hate this. Hate this How many times do I have to go through this same stupid damn thing?

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Not now DonÂ’t cry IÂ’m not the crying type .

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Oh boy, has it ever not do stop

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE I [( heart ]) Rochester, NY I [( heart ]) Rochester, NY once I not

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE they then am ever Ever?

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE OK not could Mr. Lentini Daniel

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE old Oh yeah sheÂ’s going to press the panic button as soon as she sees what Wallace is up to.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Can you move a little slower? ski Bobby

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE professional

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Can we trust Crazy PeteÂ’s brother? a man with a gun has just entered the bank

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE that into ThatÂ’s has

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Yeah, sure, go have fun with that inauguration speech thing. Good luck with the cold and the rain. IÂ’ll meet you inside after itÂ’s over.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE some I always knew you were an idiot good not does

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Be careful what you wish for. The universe has a way of coming around and biting you on the ass. Oh crap. she

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE sS hut up Everybody?

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE sS hut up pP layback any For what?

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Go now CanÂ’t. am

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE So this is it IÂ’ve finally fixed things. Daniel gets to live, and Charlotte, and Bobby, and the rest. are

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Shut up! Shut up! Shut up! Go! him

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE watch her theyÂ’ll I canÂ’t risk Daniel.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE now Unfair! Unfair! Unfair! This here

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE has this seeing stars

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Oh crap her get you

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE And that is that. Stop thinking “dead,” his Wallace’s will D ée j a à vu his her

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE does Zoe their Holy crapYikes ! Is that ThatÂ’s my own headless body I just caught a glimpse of?

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Wallace can only kill you once

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE No one was you he

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE are knows

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Oh They them

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE a

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE are Too impulsive. Too impatient. DoesnÂ’t think of consequences.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE Special needs?

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE years One small Have

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE If I can keep from getting killed. you me me everything always everything

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE maybe not choose Blitzen Not

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE truly his has HeÂ’s just being nice Older brotherly nice.

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VANDE VELDE/PAGE You were very, very brave OK


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